I really think this could be pretty could, with alot more content. Right now its great proof of concept, fantastic art, good music, decent gameplay (tho hitboxes are iffy sometimes) but i just think after an hour or 2 you've done everything. i know its a demo, but i feel like maybe you could add other jobs, or things to do on the weekend (like a relationship type thing with co-workers?) or have it so you can customise the character
it just need more things to do than just burgers imo, it need other ways to engage you and let you have fun. i think that would be solved by adding other professions, like here's a few examples.
1:add more kinds of resturants. have a fancy one where you have a whole team, have one that focuses on drinks, one that focuses on sandwiches, etc etc
2:Make the coworkers interactable and have it so they actually can become mates, you can hang out, fuck, and more
3:add stuff to do on the weekend, its just sleep atm
also i only got 1 sexual scene before the ending one, when I'd click the special order it always went "???" and never did it, i tbh think that should be removed.
But looking at it from the purely demo perspective, this is a solid start with potential. Can't wait for horny femboy cookin mama!